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December 27. Your Christmas was less than fun, and you even had to been alone for it.
You were walking to your local diner to grab some grub.
You see that it is a ghost town; but one man eating a cheeseburger and extra large fries.
You get an awkward feeling.
"I-I don't like this." You grumbled to yourself as you nervously approached the counter.

"H-hello, How may I help you?"  A young man with curly locks waited on you by the bar.
You order and take a seat. The man with the shake moves over to the seat next to your and slurps in your ear while gazing at you. Frustrated, you turn towards him.

"Excuse me? Can I help you?" You can feel your eyebrow twitching in frustration. As though his slurping and staring wasn't enough; call me maybe began to play from the speakers.
You felt your fist tighten. You didn't think today was going to go well.

"Hey, man, you look kinda...tense? You need a massage?" The man walked behind you and slowly rubbed his hands across your shoulders. You shuttered but froze in shock. Your anger had turned into a sensation you had never felt. You just met this man, not more than 5 minutes ago, but had already melted in his strong arms. "You feeling any better?" He seemed to be no harm, and simply rubbed your arms and back intently.

"T-thanks..But..I-I just met you." Your words were spoken the exact time as the songs were. You blushed thoroughly. No part of you could escape the overwhelming heat of this man.

"And this is crazy." He leaned in to your ear. The man behind the bar dropped your food when he saw you and the man behind you. "Here's my number..." He slipped you his card.
"Please, call me baby." He winked to you and stepped from the diner, looking at you as he left.

"I-I can't believe America did that!" The smaller man said.

"America? You know him?"

"That's my brother..I'm Canada... He really seemed to like you. He's never been so straight forward in all his a girl at least..I Really think he likes you... maybe you really should call him." Canada looked at the floor.

"Then I will." You took your cell phone out and dialed the number. He answered. "You told me to call, right? I am."

"Good." He told you to meet him at his address as soon as you could. You left without any food and went to America's, curious to see what would happen. You arrived shortly thereafter and knocked on the door to the huge building. The door flung open. Loud music and the smell of sweets came rushing out.  "So, this is my house." He took you in and led you to a huge bedroom. "And this is my room..." He eyeballed you and cornered you. He was moving too fast. You just learned his name, for god's sake. Your entire body once again became hot as he pushed you onto his bed.

"W-what are you doing?!" You wanted to push him away but your body wouldn't comply. He began kissing and biting at your lips, feeling up and down your sides, breathing heavily, his eyes softly closed. Your clothes were vanishing, appearing on the floor.
You gave in. Your legs were around him, your lips pressed to his. Suddenly, Canada was in the room.

"AMERICA! What have I told you about ripping girls' clothes off that you just met!?"

"nothing...I've never done it before brah."

"Oh, true...But still!" Canada tried his hardest to stop America. "I-I just can't move him at all..." Canada frowned.

"Man, I don't think she minds." You shook your head.  "I'll just make sure she's my one and only..."
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ifitaintboutthemoney Featured By Owner Mar 17, 2015  Student General Artist
Peeps like Alfred never learn. Peeps like Mattie scold Alfie.
Its a win-win situation right??
Kirychan1226 Featured By Owner Aug 28, 2014  Student Digital Artist
:icontsundereblushplz: :iconsmilieplz: :iconsocuteplz: :iconfangirlingplz:
ILIKEFANDOMS Featured By Owner May 25, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Alfred is such a dork. 
eeveemon43 Featured By Owner Dec 26, 2014
he's a cute dork
DontAskAboutIt Featured By Owner Apr 2, 2014  Student General Artist
There is a MMD video of America dancing to call me maybe…

*ahem* sorry, but lemon sequel? OwO XD
Hetalia4Ever99 Featured By Owner Jun 9, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
My one question, why was Canada creeping outside the door? Oh well, I still enjoyed reading it!:)
Retartedfangirl22 Featured By Owner Jun 10, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Honestly I wrote this so long ago, I don't remember xD !
But thank you <3
Miss-Fandom-Chan Featured By Owner Nov 25, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
He was probably actin' like France!
NinjaJaffaCake Featured By Owner May 25, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Carly Troll Jepson!
vocaloidanimefan Featured By Owner Apr 7, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
lawl Carly Rae Jepson!!! X3 Troll face XDDDDDD *still laughing*
KanaIchigo01 Featured By Owner Jan 27, 2013
i was laughing so hard during this xD *cant breathe* go for the win America!
Killer-Paw Featured By Owner Jan 20, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
what thuh fuck!
jeffthekiller46 Featured By Owner May 19, 2013  Student Digital Artist
i agree, good sir
YasminKirkland1031 Featured By Owner Jan 16, 2013
DEAR GOD!!!! Look at what Carly Rae Jepson did! Not that I am complaining.
BJD-Addict-Niclo Featured By Owner Mar 30, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Retartedfangirl22 Featured By Owner Jan 17, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
I hate that song, but, I thought it would be fun to incorporate it in a story :)
Greenleeklover1 Featured By Owner Jan 12, 2013
I wouldn't let him finish. Especially with Canada in the room...
kittygirl1351883 Featured By Owner Jan 12, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Lux and kit: gasp gasp gasp gasp gaaasp.... * dies *
Retartedfangirl22 Featured By Owner Jan 12, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
kittygirl1351883 Featured By Owner Jan 12, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Kanashii: they'll be fine watch...* Sigh* Germany made a cake.. * sigh*
Kitandlux: * back from the dead * WTF???!!!!?!?!?!?
niclo121212 Featured By Owner Jan 8, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
giantstorylover Featured By Owner Jan 7, 2013
slowniczek Featured By Owner Jan 6, 2013
ImaNinjaWizard Featured By Owner Jan 4, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
I would be so fine with that!
xxxWARGIRLxxx Featured By Owner Jan 2, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
well that escalated quickly. XDD lol
GSlover1234 Featured By Owner Dec 29, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
oh i would be totally fine with Alfred doing that~
That1AsianChick Featured By Owner Dec 28, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
normally I would be okay with that, but seriously, America. that's no excuse.
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