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As you approached Hidan he yelled out to Deidara. "Hey man! Be careful, these people are actually a bit of a challenge! It's about fucking time, right!? Any way, get your ass over here and make this more interesting!" Hidan went back to fighting. He was so fast, like lightning, it made yo feel inferior. But you wouldn't accept that, you decided to jump right in.

You concentrated I to your genjutsu, you placed your bombs discreetly so no one would notice, then looked to Deidara. "You gonna help your friend?" You urged.

"As though you had room to talk, you've done nothing!" He ran forward, not noticing the bombs you had placed.

"I got you man!" Deidara came in contact with the rouges who were standing in the sidelines. With each touch, they exploded. Deidara was shocked, he didn't understand the bombs were DNA bombs. As soon as someone else's skin, DNA, or biochemical tissue touched the bomb, it was to explode.

Soon, the battle ended. Hidan thanked Deidara and hugged him. "Who's the girl you got with you?" Hidan looked confused.

"She's my new partner, who did absolutely nothing. Fat lot of good she did, hm." Deidara looked proud in what he thought was his work.  "I killed all those guys! Yeah, and I don't even know how! I just got that good!"

"Actually, I killed them." You interjected. "You were just help." You explained the DNA bombs.

"Damn, Deidara! You were outsmarted by this chick!  And she's brand-new! You're losing your awesome!" Hidan continued to laugh manically.

Deidara pulled you off behind some trees, checking to make sure Hidan couldn't see

"Look. I never say people are better than me, yeah. But you made me look like a total idiot! "

"You don't need help with looking like an idiot." You rolled your eyes. You liked him, and here you were, insulting him.

"Damn it, you brat, listen to me! We're alike! Hm. If you don't like that then leave! Can't we just agree that we each have things worth bragging about? Ad stop mocking me!" He looked hurt.

"...I didn't realize you felt that way...I'm sorry...I thought you just didn't like me from the beginning, so I..."

He shook his head. "The second I heard you were also a bomber, I immediately became upset and jealous. " he edged closer to you.  "I was an ass...I'm sorry, yeah."

"M-me too.." He leaned in to kiss you...

"Hey!? What the fucks going on back here?"

"Dammit Hidan, you ruined everything!" Deidara's eyes were wide.  "L-let's just go home." He looked at you, as though he had a plan in mind.

You continued home.
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Just so you know. I might stop altogether. My sister has made me feel entirely obsolete and worthless, I can't express how oissed off I am so...yep.
Sorry for my attitude.
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You're not worthless actually if you are what I'm supposed to be? A part of the néant?
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:iconxdemonwolfx65:
And i love this story.
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:iconxdemonwolfx65:
None of you are worthless!
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~Animefreak2021 Feb 27, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
You're not worthless I am :'(
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~amy962 Jan 17, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
plz provide links to the next and previous chapter if ur doing chapters
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~kittykatluvur777 Jan 16, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
gah! yur nut worthless! nuuuu :iconnuplz:
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:iconmoonangel92:
please more??
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:iconluuumi-k:
I will waiting for more *-*♥
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~NiroLatsuy Jan 12, 2013  Hobbyist Artist
aww loced it cant wait for the next part ^^
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~RenjiLuv2 Jan 12, 2013  Student Traditional Artist
More more more!
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