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You were new to the neighborhood. A shy young lady who wasn't all that fond of human interaction, nor were you the kind to speak, even if someone else were to speak with you.

You had heard rumors about this new neighborhood and occurrences in which murders and kidnappings had taken places. These all tended to happen within short times of each other and were always, (At least this is what the media said) Done during the wee hours of the morning or late night.
You honestly believed it was nothing more than hokus-pokus child's play stories.


It was your first day of school, packed and ready to go, you rushed from the house wearing your anxiety like the heavy comforter still resting upon your bed upstairs. You sat by the bus stop, feeling the rain drench your skin. It felt nice. It felt like freedom. Like this would be your last move, that it was for the better, that your grades would pick up, and that your life would finally start to improve.

You noticed the bench move and immediately opened your eyes and looked beside yourself to see a new kid there. He sat with his hands folded, resting his face in them. His black hair draped over his shoulders and hands. He seemed strange, like you. His skin was pale, like yours, he was dressed in a hoodie and black pants, your usual school-wear. You wondered if you should say something, but it was too late, the bus had just arrived.

As he unfolded his hands from his face, you noticed his deep red lips and unusually pale skin. It wasn't a natural pale. It wasn't make-up. It was almost a bleached look. His face had a scar-like pattern running from the corners of his mouth to his ears. It curved into a smile, almost, no identical, to the joker.

Was he just a weird kid, or was there something more? You both got on the bus, the first stop. And you were the only two for quite some time. An awkward silence and several awkward glaces were passed. You sat adjacent to him, rather, he sat adjacent to you. You took your seat first.

"My name's Jeff." He gave a half-hearted smile and twiddled his thumbs.

"Mine's Stephanie. It's nice to meet you, Jeff. I apologize if I was acting strange..."

"Not strange at all..With my looks...Who wouldn't?"

He almost seemed entirely pleased by his unusual, and by most others perception, ugly or grotesque looks.

"Well, I don't think you look unusual or bad...If that's what you mean." You looked into his deep, black eyes. The thick black that surrounded his eyes made it seem like he lacked eyelids, he never even blinked...How could he stand the pain of such dry eyes? His eyes were bloodshot, yet somehow attracting and alluring.

"Quite the opposite, actually...After what happened...I find my appearance quite beautiful...Very, Very beautiful."

You were just about to ask him what happened, but the next stop had come, and the bus filled with high school students. Maybe on the way home...maybe next time. You just needed to talk to him. It was desirable, yet sinister. He wasn't normal, that was for sure.

As people surged by, you glanced over one last time to see him glaring at you with those unrelenting eyes; that smile, literally, carved into his face.
Well, I felt I needed to do this xD
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:icondakariamadness:
DakariaMadness Featured By Owner Jun 30, 2015  New Deviant Hobbyist General Artist
One word, 7 letters and thousands thoughts about this fic: 



AWESOME!!!
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Chaisewalters Featured By Owner Aug 15, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
I like how people can't get that Steph is you~
Otherwise, Terrific story!
Looking forward to a glimpse of a conclusion to it! 
^w^
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WhenDarknessStrikes Featured By Owner Aug 8, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
This is really neat.
Now, sure, my name isn't Stephanie, but it's better than the name insert thing.
I always read that like the characters are just screaming "name" or "your name" XD
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Cataclasum Featured By Owner May 29, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Nice!
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OtakuArtist2014 Featured By Owner Apr 20, 2014
Um...sooooooo my name really is Stephanie....so about that... Jeff I swear if you try to kill me I will take your own knife and kill you with it.... or should I be scared out of my mind.... =_=
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:iconemoprincesspeach:
emoprincesspeach Featured By Owner Feb 8, 2014
Ooooo its getting good!
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:iconone-life-to-end:
One-life-to-end Featured By Owner Jan 13, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
It is not an x reader story if you have given the reader their name and looks. I suggest you correct it or you will see quite a bit of harassment on the matter, though your other stories were intruiging.
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:iconretartedfangirl22:
Retartedfangirl22 Featured By Owner Jan 21, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
I've heard this quite a bit. 
It's a scenario x reader. 
Not a plain x reader.  
But thanks ^^;
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:iconbumblebee069:
Bumblebee069 Featured By Owner Nov 14, 2013
Awesome
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:iconkyomihikaru:
KyomiHikaru Featured By Owner Oct 25, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
My name is Stephanie?
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:iconlemonlolly16:
LemonLolly16 Featured By Owner Nov 24, 2013
YOUR LIFE IS A LIE
lol jk
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KyomiHikaru Featured By Owner Nov 24, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
XD
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IAmLexeh Featured By Owner Sep 21, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
thats weird cause before I was born my mom was originally planning onnaming me Stephanie or Danyelle but I got name Alexis instead cause mydad named me.
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TheN0Gravity Featured By Owner Sep 15, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
I like it. Thumbs up (is there an icon for that?)
I don't care about my name being Stephanie or whatever. As long as its not some stupid name like Assia or something. Lol
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:iconporcelain-child:
Porcelain-child Featured By Owner Sep 8, 2013
Who DAFUQ is stephany?
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gymleader97 Featured By Owner Nov 7, 2013
Italy: Vee~ You'a are Stephany in the story! :iconyayitalyplz:

Germany: ITALY! STOP BREAKING ZE FOURTH WALL! :icongermanyplz:

Sealand: What Italy said, Porcelain. :iconyaysealandplz:
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:iconporcelain-child:
Porcelain-child Featured By Owner Dec 27, 2013
well alrighty then.... my name isn't even close to stephany though... so it makes it kinda awkward... wouldn't it just be better to put (name) there instead? 

and thx italy,sealand. XD
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gymleader97 Featured By Owner Dec 29, 2013
2P Me: No body said it was giving you a choice! Kesesesesese.~

1P Me: Ignore her, don't worry I did the (name) thing to for my own enjoyment.

2P Me: Screw you Kacey.

1P Me: *places down cup of tea* I love you to, Casey.
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deaththekidfan229 Featured By Owner Jul 9, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
grim (me..): *sip's tea* hmmm...a new tv show.
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:iconjourneysthegirl1:
journeysthegirl1 Featured By Owner Aug 24, 2013
O.o my name is not stephanie
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:iconrowdyruffgirlshade:
rowdyruffgirlshade Featured By Owner Aug 20, 2013  Student
it says Xreader why is my name stephanie
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DarkPrincessGirl1 Featured By Owner Aug 20, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
I have to ask, where did you get that picture?
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KuranYuuki100 Featured By Owner Aug 9, 2013
Ooo my names stephenie... Going to change my name if the story tells me that that its my name... If this was a x reader why does it have a name?
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ppgzlulu Featured By Owner Jul 16, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Why is my name stephanie
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SkylaTheKiller Featured By Owner Jul 15, 2013  Hobbyist
My name is Stephanie? I never knew that
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:iconretartedfangirl22:
Retartedfangirl22 Featured By Owner Jul 15, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
It's a scenario. Not an X-reader. That's why.
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LawlzWhat Featured By Owner Jan 15, 2014
Change the title then, because advertising it as a reader insert would be false. It's clearly misleading to your readers. 
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TheMidWinterWolf Featured By Owner Jul 11, 2013   Artist
dude i love the picture and love the story
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:icondeathwolf76:
Deathwolf76 Featured By Owner Jun 30, 2013  Student Digital Artist
:iconbrohugplz: Moar, I say. I likey. Pwease?
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:iconemotionwolf:
Emotionwolf Featured By Owner Jun 25, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
oh jesus!!!!so sexy!!!!!*HNNNGG DIES* so awesome!love this fanfic!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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:iconretartedfangirl22:
Retartedfangirl22 Featured By Owner Jun 26, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Thank you very much :iconletmehugyouplz:

It really means a ton to me <3
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Emotionwolf Featured By Owner Jun 27, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
oh ur welcome i just couldnt get enough off the fanfic!!!!!:hug:
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Eve-Of-Halloween Featured By Owner Jun 24, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
HOT DAMN!!!! That is a smexy pic! And I Love it, it has a great story line so far, let me know if their a part 2! I usually just par him up with my CreepyPasta character I'm making. Her name is Dawn the Side Switcher, if you wanna read her backstory just let me know and I'll send a link! I have a couple of images of her in my gallery to!
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Retartedfangirl22 Featured By Owner Jun 24, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Yep! There is a part 2 and 3 so far <3

And I'd love to learn more !
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Eve-Of-Halloween Featured By Owner Jun 25, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Her story is here [link] please comment on if it's good enough to submit to the CreepyPasta site!
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Username353 Featured By Owner Jun 23, 2013
DAYUM WHERE'D YOU GET THAT PREVIEW PIC
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:iconretartedfangirl22:
Retartedfangirl22 Featured By Owner Jun 23, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
TUMBLR MY DEAR FRIEND, TUMBLR IS THE ANSWER TO THE UNIVERSE <3
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Username353 Featured By Owner Jun 24, 2013
I SUDDENLY UNDERSTAND EVERYTHING.
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Animorphs1 Featured By Owner Jun 22, 2013  Student Digital Artist
WHAT?!?!?!WHAT?!?!WWWHHHAAAAATTTT?!?!
I am freaked out right now! Once I read "My name's Jeff" and "I'm Stephanie" that is just creepy!
I made a couple of my own of Jeff the killer and my oc Stephanie Brooks, Steph for short. Don't believe me? Check it right here >> [link]
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Animorphs1 Featured By Owner Jun 22, 2013  Student Digital Artist
Did you rip off my character or was it a happy-yet-creepy coincidence?
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ProxyNumber001 Featured By Owner Jun 22, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
We meet again :iconlololololplz:
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RavenluvsSesshomaru Featured By Owner Jun 21, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Nice, I suggest in the future you make xreader stories fit everyone by using things like [name] and [eye colour], [hair colour], it's what I've been doing on my newer stuff. It puts the reader more into the story to make it feel like it is really them there. :3
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Stephie-chan559 Featured By Owner Jun 20, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Lol I was reading this then had a little spaz when I saw the name I was all like 'omg thats my name what a co-in-ki-dink !!!'
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SunShineMoonLight Featured By Owner Jun 20, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Really nice! :3
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NyanJeffDaKilller Featured By Owner Jun 19, 2013  Student Digital Artist
BAH too much cuteness! XD nice! :iconjeffthekillerplz:
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vocaloid-luver Featured By Owner Jun 14, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
It is weird that I think he looks cute in the top picture?

Anyway, I love this story so far, I hope there'll be more than two chapters ^^
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Retartedfangirl22 Featured By Owner Jun 14, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
There will be <3
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CheshireRose247 Featured By Owner Jun 14, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Is there gonna be more?!? I love this I NEED :iconmoarplz:!!! Pwease? For the bunny? E:3
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Retartedfangirl22 Featured By Owner Jun 14, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Of course there will be more :3
Mwahahahahaha!
In time <3
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