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Finally, your own place, your own furniture, your own car. You'd been longing this for such a time that you thought nothing could go wrong now.

Upon unloading your belongings into your pre-used house, you heard a loud crackle under your foot.
Glass? A trail of glass, actually...
you followed it to the back door, which was open.

"Hello?" You surveyed the back yard, upon doing this, you noticed to adolescents scurrying off, shattering beer bottles and silly stringing your yard.

"Welcome to the neighborhood, Bitch!" The two kids got away. You tried to not let it get to you. (So much for nothing going wrong, though.)
Besides, you left the back door unlocked, you were practically asking for some jerks to come in. You cleaned up the glass, and this time, locked the back door.

That night, you managed to unpack the majority of your things. But not in peace. You kept hearing laughter. It must've been from those damned kids. if they persisted, you'd waste no more time, and alert the police.

But it was a hard thing to prove, after all, you had already cleaned up the mess, and the laughs...they seemed to be near you...As though they were inside your own head.  You dismissed your absurd thought as nothing more than anxiety and the fear of being on your own for the first time in your life.

You rested your body in your own bed, placed your hand on your own pillow, and, quite pleased, closed your eyes. You started to drift into sleep, your lips curling into a smile. Purely and for once in your life, content.

But it came again. The laughing. Sharp, painful, stinging, even...The laughs seemed to literally pierce your ears. You jolted from the bed, running to the bathroom.
Just as you expected, your ears were bleeding. What the hell was going on?

You cleaned your ears and looked up some causes for bleeding ear and hearing odd noises: Ruptured Eardrum, Ear Infection, Blood Pressure, Menieres  Syndrome...
Okay, It could just be an infection. You'd be okay. You cleaned up the blood and headed back to the bed.

But now you couldn't sleep. You needed to admit it, you were scared. But you honestly didn't even know of what...You eventually dozed off, waking up to all your kitchen chairs setting in your room, and your clothes strewn across the wall, being held up with tacks, which you had left in an unopened box.

"W-What...?" Had you done this in some sort of odd fit in your sleep? You began to clean your room, but you noticed that as soon as you would move something, it would move itself right back to where it had been.

"That is enough!! I'm so sick of this!" You threw your fist through a wall. But it wasn't your fist at all...It was a body. A body just crashed through your wall. But where was the visible body? There was nothing there.

"H-hello?" You knew it was absolutely ridiculous to be talking to this invisible...thing, but you felt like you had to.

"Caught me, huh? e-heheheh." Rising upward, like static, a tall, lanky body began to appear. Black and white stripes, fur, a ringed-cone nose, ragged hair and black-singed eyes. What was he? Some sort of horror-movie clown?

"What are you..." Stepping backwards, you felt your heart begin to race.

"Why does that matter?" He picked himself up from the ground and approached you. His abnormally long fingers reaching for your trembling lips. "Shhhh." His pale face cracked into a smile. "Don't be afraid." He gave out that laugh you'd been hearing. Your eyes grew wide, your thoughts running rapidly. What was he about to do to you? What even...was he? Was he responsible for those children?
Request from my wife, :iconinnocenzo: it's no good but I TRIED
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:icontoast-n-knives:
Toast-N-Knives Featured By Owner Jan 12, 2015  Professional General Artist
I like L.J. Meow :3 
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Bunnygoblin Featured By Owner Dec 30, 2014
its very good.
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:iconfelishathewolf1:
felishathewolf1 Featured By Owner Oct 12, 2014  Student Digital Artist
You haz a wife O.O
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:iconpeppy2250:
Peppy2250 Featured By Owner Sep 17, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
My god, thats so cool!
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moustache1719 Featured By Owner Jul 24, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
XD when those kids said "welcome to the neighborhood bitch" all I would do would be to say "thank you for the welcome"
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DaringDash20 Featured By Owner Sep 28, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
ikr
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:iconmoustache1719:
moustache1719 Featured By Owner Sep 29, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
I laugh when people call me that.. It's one of the funnist things in the world
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:icondaringdash20:
DaringDash20 Featured By Owner Sep 29, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
So funny
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:iconmoustache1719:
moustache1719 Featured By Owner Oct 1, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Yessz..Indeed
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VoiceUnheard98 Featured By Owner Jun 9, 2014  Student General Artist
Oh, please, this is super awesome! I didn't see not one flaw, and it's soooo detailed and realistic! You're awesome!
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brightpaw8 Featured By Owner Jun 3, 2014
Part one I can't find it D:
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BrooketheGothGirl Featured By Owner Jun 17, 2014  Professional Writer
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death-the-kide Featured By Owner May 20, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
nice picture
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xxlaughing-jackxx Featured By Owner Apr 6, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
hehehehe~
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Faerie-Norway Featured By Owner May 4, 2014
I love how you felt the need to comment three times with this... xD
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xxlaughing-jackxx Featured By Owner Apr 6, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
hehehehe~
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xxlaughing-jackxx Featured By Owner Apr 6, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
hehehehe~
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:iconlaughingjacksbride:
laughingjacksbride Featured By Owner Apr 19, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Hey LJ maybe we sulk get together hehehhehehehe
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xxlaughing-jackxx Featured By Owner May 3, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
I mean sure if you want~~~~
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laughingjacksbride Featured By Owner May 3, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Alright hehehe
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xxlaughing-jackxx Featured By Owner Apr 6, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
hehehehe~
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:iconbrightpaw8:
brightpaw8 Featured By Owner Jun 3, 2014
I like the black and white you over the color because I am terrified of clowns..... but I'll make a tiny acception..........
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:iconhope-candy:
Hope-Candy Featured By Owner Mar 14, 2014
er....anymore?
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MidnightRosees Featured By Owner Mar 13, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Continue?
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:iconlonedagger16:
lonedagger16 Featured By Owner Mar 3, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Hmm good story
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QQKachu Featured By Owner Feb 26, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
lovely 0///0
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WolfsRainKibaXBlai Featured By Owner Dec 30, 2013  Hobbyist
More, please! You're story is great! +fav Love 
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villiantimewleeannn Featured By Owner Dec 24, 2013  Professional General Artist
That is kind of cute! :iconljtrollfaceplz:
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Happyluckygirl22 Featured By Owner Apr 11, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Yes it's cute we sucker punched laughing jack throw a wall lol laughing my ass off
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sampea Featured By Owner Dec 10, 2013
Scary...
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KisameFanFromHell Featured By Owner Dec 9, 2013
*chuckles* What a prankster.
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shadowlox21 Featured By Owner Dec 1, 2013  Student Filmographer
:iconsmiledogplz:
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Hope-Candy Featured By Owner Mar 14, 2014
OMG ITS SMILE DOG!!! :'(


*hides*
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shadowlox21 Featured By Owner Mar 14, 2014  Student Filmographer
where
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:iconhope-candy:
Hope-Candy Featured By Owner Mar 14, 2014
....the pic? *hides under bed*
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:iconshadowlox21:
shadowlox21 Featured By Owner Mar 14, 2014  Student Filmographer
ok :calls smile dog: go under the bed boy
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:iconhope-candy:
Hope-Candy Featured By Owner Mar 14, 2014
FUUUUU!!!!!
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:iconshadowlox21:
shadowlox21 Featured By Owner Mar 15, 2014  Student Filmographer
:icontrollfaceplz:
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Hope-Candy Featured By Owner Mar 15, 2014
You evil! *runs*
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blackhorse81701 Featured By Owner Dec 29, 2013
Well then.....
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:iconpeapod1281:
peapod1281 Featured By Owner Dec 9, 2013  Student Artist
Why does da peoplez say smile looks sacry? He is adorable in his own demonic way.
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DivineChunky Featured By Owner Dec 24, 2013  Student Traditional Artist
Well, now you've got to pass it on...
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:iconpeapod1281:
peapod1281 Featured By Owner Jan 3, 2014  Student Artist
Nu i want him to visit i always have a rare cooked steak in my fridge for him but he never comes so i cook it more and eat it and after a while i buy another
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gaarasdemonickitty Featured By Owner Nov 29, 2013  Student Artist
haahhehahehehehahahaHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAhahahehehe ok im done this is already awesome
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AlinaMau Featured By Owner Nov 1, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
This. Is. AWESOME!

I can't wait for the next part X3

Hehe I hope Jack is alright though, I did just punch him XD
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KyomiHikaru Featured By Owner Oct 25, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
XD I punched Laughing Jack.
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hawksmybaby Featured By Owner Oct 20, 2013
I love this...
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purpledragoness13 Featured By Owner Oct 14, 2013
Not bad🎩
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